It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood.
Do you support or oppose this plan?
It is surprising that some people prefer to have restaurants and other facilities in different neighborhoods than their homes. They alleged that residential areas must be separated from commercial ones, otherwise it would be deleterious. I believe that this idea is not plausible, therefore, I support the innovative plan to construct a new restaurant in my neighborhood. I feel this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, I like to eat out frequently. Having many options of restaurants or cafes in my living area is an advantage for me because I would spend less time on traffic searching for places to eat. For example, last week I got hungry late at night and I had not any food at home. I decided to ask for food and then I had to go out to pick it up, unfortunately, it took half an hour. If there was a restaurant near my house it would not take so long time for me to eat at that time.
Secondly, having some facilities around our neighborhood might increase the real estate value of our houses. Although some people disagree, the majority of people, who are looking for a house to purchase, prefer neighborhoods that have restaurants, drugstores and supermarkets around it. This is due to the advantage to avoid traffic in their daily lives. Hence, I would love it if my house increases in value because of this improvement in my neighborhood.
Finally, the area might be safer with the increase in the movement and circulation of people and cars. Residential areas are usually quiet and bucolic which may be dangerous for people to walk alone to get home. For example, sometimes I walk to get home after work, so the movement and all hustle and bustle may turn my walks home safer. Some people may claim that the movement may disturb the residents of the area, however, I believe that if everybody respects the rules nobody will be prejudice. For instance, customers should not park their cars in forbidden places, the restaurant’s owner should respect the hours of attendance and maintain the proper volume of the musics played.
To sum up, I strongly support the plan to build a new restaurant in my neighborhood. This is because I will have an option more closely when I go out to eat, my house may increase in value and the movement generated by the clients may turn my walking home safer. These concomitant advantages will ameliorate my daily life routine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 468, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rules'' or 'rule's'?
Suggestion: rules'; rule's
... believe that if everybody respects the rules nobody will be prejudice. For instance,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77536231884 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85913314638 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509661835749 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7428690938 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175410679101 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612929376905 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694377986695 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116231514078 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724565295487 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.