Is it important to keep your old friends than to make new friends
Having good friends is regarded as one of the greatest blessings, any living creature is bestowed with. Good friends always add taste to the life. They offer a helping hand whenever we need them and also accompany us to enjoy the cherish able moments of our lives.
Now the question is whether it is important to keep older friends or to make new ones. Well, we can have arguments in favour of both and finally may end up with relatively favouring one of these slightly.
Older friends, I believe, are the most trustworthy. Being older, we might have spent a lot of time together and might be knowing one another well. So it is easy to mingle with them again, no matter how long we have been apart. Also it has been seen that when older friends meet after a long period of time, their love for one another bursts out, giving way for more sympathy and care for one another. History is a witness to the fact that sometimes this love and sympathy for one another rises to such a higher degree that they are ready to sacrifice anything for one another.
Now let us look into making of new friends. There is no reason why not to make new friends. New friends are always made when we go to places we have never been before. For example, for studying purpose or for doing any job, if we happen to move to an entirely new place, we have to deal with the new community. If we want our time, in this new place, to go smoothly, we have to make new friends. By doing so, most of our problems would get easily solved. For example, we have to go to any place we don't know of, our friends will come to our rescue
Summarily I would like to say that there should be no comparison between the two types of friends made in the titular topic. we can never forget our older friends and at the same time we can continue making new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eed them and also accompany us to enjoy the cherish able moments of our lives. Now the qu...
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...h and finally may end up with relatively favouring one of these slightly. Older...
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... spent a lot of time together and might be knowing one another well. So it is easy to ming...
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: period
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...ime we can continue making new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, may, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28985507246 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14713947835 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527536231884 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5574942405 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2222222222 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206250204583 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876083858931 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100546202997 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141683809933 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675539155381 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.