It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life?
Since the beginning of this century, the world has become narrow compare to the last centuries. In order to the globalization, any event happen in any part of the world can easily affect other parts; even though the faraway ones. Some people believe that it significant to be aware about events happening around the world. However, there is a solid body of opinion that casts doubt in these beliefs. From a personal perspective, it is essential for people to know about events even those which do not affect their daily life, given that they can keep themselves updated, ensure their safety, and broader their knowledge. Below I will strive to explain my supporting points in more details.
The foremost point, listening to the news is very important to be updated about what happen in another part of the world. Provided that people update themselves with the current news, they can be informed with the new rules and regulations. For example, in The United State of America president Trump made an executive order that some nationalities have been banded from entering the States, this new regulation made a heated debate not only in the American society but also all over the world. Moreover, many important episodes happened in the world influence everyone’s life indirectly. Consequently, it is important to follow up the current events.
Next, couple with keep self-updated, ensure safety is a second reason of the importance to know the events happening around the world. Provided that people want to spend their vacation in any part of the world, they should know the safety issues of the place they will visit. For example, in 2011 all the flights going to Egypt were canceled due to a political situation. Although Egypt is fantastic place to visit, few years ago it was not a safe place for spending pleasant time. Therefore, from political perspective the news can guide people about which places are safe to visit and which ones are not.
Finally, people who listen or read the news always have a boarder knowledge. Schools should encourage students to be aware a bout the current events not only because it can improve brain function, but also help them to score better in the examination. A survey conducted by experts from Oxford university found that students who had a regular attention to the world’s news were able to speak well in debate competition. As a result, from educational perspective knowing about the world’s new can maximize the learning potential outcomes.
Taking everything into a consideration, without a doubt actively participating to know a bout the global current issue has great benefits and underestimating the significance of these benefits in our life is not logical. It is suggested that people compromise and ensure that they use their spare time to know about what happens outside where they live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... what happens outside where they live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2396.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05485232068 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71489725293 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0505529564 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.909090909 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347432323064 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929678524272 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847547910575 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185513613853 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858884759001 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.