It is more important to keep old friends than to make new friends?
In my point of view, I prefer to keep my old friends than to make new ones. The reasons that force me to think this are: old friends proved their true relationship with us, they know about our life better than the newest and old friends had good and bad moments with you and know how to help us.
The first point to support my preference refers to a true relationship between two friends. Nowadays, we know that is very difficult to get the truth from other people. We observe everyday people lying to get something or trying to be better than they really are just to show a different personality for society. In an old relationship between friends, this situation cannot occur. The truth will be always on the top.
The second point says about how old friends know about our life and how important it can be. An old friendship is very helpful because the other person knows how you deal with any situation and your thoughts and believes. This is something really important because old friends can give us some advices that will help our lives and can show us some mistakes that we were not able to figure out.
In addition, old friends were supporting us when we had the worst moments of our lives. Consequently, they had the opportunity to show us how important they were with difficulties. Therefore, they had the privilege to be beside us when the best moments happened. So, they lived with us the unhappy situations and also the happiness.
To conclude, I believe that is better to maintain our relationships with old friends. A real friendship is like a relative who we have. When you are in trouble you have someone to trust. In the other hand, when you realize your wins, you have good friends to share it. Nevertheless, we have to be always open for a new good relationship. The world is full of good people and very often we can meet a new one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...endship is like a relative who we have. When you are in trouble you have someone to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, nevertheless, really, second, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53412462908 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49998899345 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474777448071 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4493521741 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250224952958 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737927057075 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988549964584 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150604403749 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118457857867 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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