It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Nowadays, most people think that they should concentrate more on how to keep their old friends. Because they believe on the saying in our culture which is old thing is a root of our life, we can not forget our root. Although, they are not communicating with their old friends as friends any more, they are still forced themselves to keep the relationships. But in my personal opinion, I think making new friends is more important than keeping old friends for the following reasons.
First of all, while we are growing, we get more information than before, we do not have common topics with old friends any more. In that situation, we need to meet new friends that we have the same hobbies or have same viewpoint with us. For example, one of my friends consist her thought that she keeps with old friends, but her friends do not like that. They make new friends and hang out with new friends. Now they do not want to hang with my friend any more because they think there are not common topic among them any more.
Furthermore, we can learn new things from new friends. My older brother keeps making new friends until now. He has a lot of friends. Before his dream is to become a policemen. One of his friends suggested that he can learn a foreign language. Suddenly he noticed that English language is his new hobby. That is why he became an English teacher.
What’s more, making new friends can give you an exciting free time. If we just focus on keeping old friends, it means the number of friends is limited. I like lively settings more than silent ones. If I have a lot of new friends, the atmosphere on my birthday party will be exciting.
In conclusion, I think making new friends is much better than only keeping old friends because it can make our lives more interesting, we can learn more things, and will have an exciting environment. When we are happy, our life is perfect.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.Use specific reasons and examples t 76
- It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. 71
- Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. 70
- People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like do rather than doing things they should do. 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...es to keep the relationships. But in my personal opinion, I think making new friends is more imp...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nds until now. He has a lot of friends. Before his dream is to become a policemen. One...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a policeman' or simply 'policemen'?
Suggestion: a policeman; policemen
... friends. Before his dream is to become a policemen. One of his friends suggested that he c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54093567251 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40822980799 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479532163743 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0631412431 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5909090909 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504667669433 0.236089414692 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16471159711 0.076458572812 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128660108779 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330677590603 0.150856017488 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730980614361 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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