Our friends are a very important part of our life. They are always by our side when we need them and some matters can only be shared with friends. Without friends, life would not be as interesting and colorful. While some people think that it is important to only keep their old friends, other people believe it is much more important to make new friends. Though both old and new friends are valuable, in my view making new friends is more important for two crucial reasons.
First, as our life and surrounding is constantly changing and we are meeting new people every day, we should make new friend to keep up with it. We do not live in a single place forever. We also do not work in the same organization or study in the same institution throughout our life. So, as our environment changes we need to make new friend in the new scenario. For example, after I completed my high school I moved from my hometown to a city named Dhaka, the capital of Bangladesh, to get admitted in college. Before going there all my friends were from my hometown. We spent our times together by hanging out, playing and visiting different places. But as I moved out of my hometown, these activities were not possible with my old friends. So I made new friends at Dhaka who had similar interests like me. We watched movie, talked about sports, worked on projects and helped each other with study in college. If I didn't make new friends after coming to Dhaka, life would be miserable for me. This experinece taught me the importance of making new friends.
Second, new friends and networking with new people help us to improve and grow our capabilities. If we are always busy with old friend and do not make new ones our perspective will be narrow. We will not be able to broaden our mental horizon and learn more about the diversity of our society. For instance, after graduating I joined an company as an engineer. I meet people who are different from my friends. They were more experienced and matured, travelled a lot around the world and had a different view of life from my friends. As I continued to work with them I made friendship with some of my colleagues. I learned a lot from their experience. One of my friend was an expatriate from UK. From him, I learned about the culture, society, food and life of abroad. We also shared our view on different matters like football, politics, government policies and new technological advances. We both benefitted from our friendship. These were not possible if I hadn't made new friends at new place.
To sum, making new friends is very important because our environment is constantly changing and they help us to learn more and grow. So, we all should focus more to make new friends in our lives in conjuction with keeping old friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “So , as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e same institution throughout our life. So, as our environment changes we need to make...
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Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...Bangladesh, to get admitted in college. Before going there all my friends were from my...
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Suggestion: didn't
... each other with study in college. If I didnt make new friends after coming to Dhaka,...
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Suggestion:
...rtance of making new friends. Second, new friends and networking with new peop...
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...For instance, after graduating I joined an company as an engineer. I meet people w...
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...different view of life from my friends. As I continued to work with them I made fr...
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...riendship. These were not possible if I hadnt made new friends at new place. To su...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192028985507 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.16847826087 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0996376811594 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0525362318841 0.046263068375 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.121376811594 0.0685040099705 177% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128623188406 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0326086956522 0.0351676179071 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57041508105 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0235507246377 0.0309702414327 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0036231884058 0.00188951952338 192% => OK
Determiners: 0.0525362318841 0.0887237588012 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0126811594203 0.0209618222197 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0054347826087 0.0139019557991 39% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2775.0 2387.08602151 116% => OK
No of words: 496.0 408.028673835 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59475806452 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302419354839 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23185483871 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161290322581 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104838709677 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57041508105 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443548387097 0.524397521467 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.4246737527 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6684587814 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6474568242 48.84282405 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.71875 120.699889404 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3125 0.644075263715 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 38.685483871 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.03174603175 1.45489161554 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37487891733 0.300154397459 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0958113234598 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0800200020467 0.0752933317313 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.384723796768 0.497263757937 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135370364573 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117828968739 0.114077575197 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130231192347 0.0781384742642 167% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.409344395106 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0802052902733 0.067059652881 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340673164911 0.210909579961 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133919215882 0.0618886996521 216% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8870967742 193% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 19.0 8.42114695341 226% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 27.0 13.6433691756 198% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.