It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
No one can deny that there are both negative and positive aspects of old friends and new friends. It will be a very hard task to point out a winner one. But if I were forced to pick, I would definitely go for old friends. I think that old friends are more valuable than the new ones in terms of friendship. As I believe, my points on this decision are to be elaborated on the subsequent paragraphs.
First, the point that on friendship, the thing that first comes out is called "Trust". It is undeniable that trust is the base of true friendship. Without trust, anyone is not be called upon as anyones friend. My decision on this point is very much influenced by one of my personal experience. Once I got into a money debt. I could not lend money from anyone as I had nothing keep as the insurence. One of my old friend rescued me by lending money without the insurence. Moreover, he did not forced me to give something permanently in return. Upon asking, he said that it was the trust that was the base of this money lending. He trusted me particulaly as an old friend who will not deceive him in future. In several times I got these kind of experience where old friends come up in the time of need because old friendship contains trust unlike the new ones.
Second, old friends share an amount of memories. These memories are precious than any hidden treasure because a person lives through these memories. He/she might not get profited from them, but surely to be happiest if he/she have a lot of it. From my very personal experience I can testify for that. Once one of my neighbour had an accident after his retirement from the job and he went to coma. He was only be able to response through emotions. His childhood friends went frequently to visit him in the hospital and share a lot of old memories. By this, his conditions got improved and after successive sessions, he came out of coma. Doctors explained that the memories and the emotions attached to them were key part of his treatment. This is only a single example. Many more can be found from everyday life experience.
One might argue that a peron might not have the same social class as the old friends have which may trigger a discrimination. But the real truth is that there is no place of discriminiation in friendship. If it is present than it is not true friendship. One should leave it as it will only cause harm.
Finally, it is evident that old frienship has certain postive aspects that are totally undeniable in one's life. Hence, from my point of view, old frienship and friends are imporant than the new ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51059322034 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62403369309 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466101694915 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2089856243 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.5151515152 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.303030303 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255687669166 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680789568483 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956231650032 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166370251032 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592437466226 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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