Friends are an integral part of one's life. There is a common saying - a friend in need is a friend indeed. Without friends, we cannot accomplish things easily, have fun in life and most importantly, it is not possible to share our bad experiences to get relieved of them. Hence, having friends plays an important part in a person's life journey. But, let us come to the question about the importance of making new friends or keeping our older ones. I personally feel that making new friends is more important in life.
In the first place, we learn a lot of new things from our friends in our life. I we had a limited circle, it would not be possible to explore the plethora of interests. For instance, I have learned swimming from one of my first childhood friends, about 10 years ago. As I grew up, I made other friends in college and at the workplace and from these friends I learned many other activities - playing football, working out, drawing, music and much more. Had I not made other people as my new friends, I would not have learned skills other than swimming. Hence, by having new friends, we can explore new things and find other interests in life, without which life would be dull and unexciting.
Additionally, it is not possible for all the friends to be together throughout their life. Some of them need to commute or travel to other places and this increases the distance and the frequency of communication. As we need some other person to share our current problems or have fun, we are bounded to make new friends. For instance, among my friends, three of them flew to other country and we occasionally connect with each other - due to their different time zones, colleges and various other factors. As they need people to help them at their place, they made new friends. Likewise, I needed new people to share my thoughts, so I made new friends at our workplace. Hence, as it might not be possible for a group of friends to be together all the time, we always need to make new friends.
Moreover, having the same old friends would be boring. For instance, my brother who has the same old 3 friends, from his school days enjoys a little in life when compared to me, who had many friends - around twenty I suppose. While my brother and his friends play the same old video games and sports, I play a lot of new games as I have a larger group of friends. Besides that, if his couple of friends are busy - studying or on a vacation, my brother feels the day as quotidian. However, if five of my friends are on vacation or out of state, as I still have other friends, I never feel bored or feel alone. Thus, making new friends helps us to engage ourselves in exciting activities all the time, which is not possible if there are fewer ones.
In conclusion, although we made many new friends in a later part of our lives, we must not forget our older ones. Recalling all the good olden days spent with our old friends would make me smile and relieve my pressure at work most of the times. Anyway, making new friends helps a person to learn new things and never gives him a feeling of loneliness. As change is an integral part of one's life, we need to make new friends as it is not possible for all the older ones to stay at one place all the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2664.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 601.0 407.700716846 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43261231281 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95129289623 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40090787288 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40765391015 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 807.3 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0066677798 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8620689655 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.724137931 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.20689655172 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 28.0 11.8709677419 236% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339198685613 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112084770958 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774587268072 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214451690735 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559915653284 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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