It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ar with the key concepts of that thing. I feel this this way for several reasons ...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
... the key concepts of that thing. I feel this this way for several reasons which I will ex...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...s considered as one the hardest subject thats why teacher make extra effort to make u...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... that we can solve further question and dont get confuse while solving it. but if th...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t confuse while solving it. but if they dont teach the fundamental idea but just onl...
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Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'memorized'.
Suggestion: memorized
... the mind without roting it but we have memorize the facts and revise it thoroughly inor...
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Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
.... For example, If someone near the pond cant do fishing and we help them providing ...
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Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...If someone near the pond cant do fishing and we help them providing fish everyday...
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Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to provide' or 'provide'.
Suggestion: to provide; provide
... pond cant do fishing and we help them providing fish everyday can make that person enti...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ishing and we help them providing fish everyday can make that person entirely dependent...
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Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ishing then he can do it by himself and dont have to rely on others whenever he is h...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...rely on others whenever he is hungry. so, there are many benefits of learning id...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...ply it whenever and wherever we are. It provide ability to cope up with every problem i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, i feel, i think, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60424028269 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35169032343 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554770318021 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2406083086 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.583333333 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317936599636 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117611745048 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100940764871 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186986300734 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982562910776 0.0645574589148 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.