It's better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are younger rather than when you are older.
Without doubts, traveling abroad provides people with a lot of benefits. some people might say that it is better to visit other countries when they are older while others do not. Both sides have their own reasons and examples that support their views. if I were asked to choose one, I would like to go abroad when I am younger. there are several reasons as follows.
First of all, traveling different countries gives people chances to be more open-minded. when they go abroad, they are exposed to different cultures. These different cultures might broaden their perspective towards the world, understanding different values exist. For example, when I was a child, I saw a classmate from India having his meal with a bare hand. I was so uncomfortable because I had rarely seen this kind of behavior. I kept some distance from him and I even made fun of him. after that, when I was grown up, I visited California, the USA for a conference. I met people from India and Arabs who had the same eating habit with the classmate. By meeting them and having dinner with them, I experienced different cultures. I noticed that we have a lot of thing in common other than having meals with bare hands. if I had experienced other cultures earlier by traveling earlier, I would not have made fun of the classmate from India. this implies that traveling abroad when younger is more beneficial to us.
In addition, traveling other countries when people are younger made people have bigger dreams.
The younger people have more time to do something and more opportunities to try something. when they have big dreams, they are more likely to achieve their goals. For example, one of my friends works at the headquarter of united nation, new york. when he was a university student, he felt that living only in his country for the rest of his life would be so boring and alway wanted to experience other countries. he worked so hard to earn money for his trip and he finally traveled all over Canada and the United States when he was senior. while visiting new york, he went to the head quarter of the united nations and met a person who worked there. he finds out that living in new york and working at the united nations would be so exciting while living in Canada is boring. after that, he made up his mind to work for the united nations, and prepared for the entrance exam of it. Fortunately, he could meet the requirements of the united nations since he had a chance to take mandatory classes of the organization before his graduation. finally, he entered the united nations. if he had not traveled in his younger age, he couldn’t have a big dream like working for the international organization and would have harder time to meet the requirement. this implies that visiting other countries in younger ages provides people with more benefits.
In brief, the advantages of traveling other countries in younger ages outweigh disadvantages of this. All in all, the importance of traveling abroad cannot be overestimated in pursuit of success in our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in brief, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2525.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 530.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7641509434 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63270027074 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466037735849 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 798.3 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4363816899 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.90625 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223181711452 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668320197526 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675817550639 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163305330755 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514638738953 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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