As the leader of a city, what would you do to ensure the prosperity and success of the city?
A. creating job opportunities for the unemployed;
B. lowering food price;
C. providing affordable housing
The success of a city has to do with everyone living in this city. As a leader, it is necessary to focus on not only the city’s prosperity, but improving living standard of citizen is of importance as well. Among these three tactics, I prefer to set up the plan about creating job opportunities for the unemployed.
First of all, the fundamental factor for achieving success of a city is dealing with living problems which decide whether the poor can survive or not. House is not indispensable for everyone, especially for the people who even have no ability to live. Even though the price becomes affordable, paying for a house still need large numbers of money. Thus, providing affordable housing is relatively not a good strategy to ensure the prosperity and success since if only service for the rich and abandon poor people, it is impossible to reach successful aim for this city. even worse, this plan will be more likely to attract people with huge wealth and they tend to expand their own prosperity through purchasing houses in lower price. If things go on like that, the gap between the rich and the poor will be enlarged intensively and inevitably cause damage about city’s development.
When it comes to food price, it is more suitable for all the people living in the city because food is basic in daily and no one wants to buy it in higher price. Compared with house, this tactic can better offer the requirement for subsistence. People in every hierarchy get the benefits from the strategy that lowering food price. And it is a good approach to raise the standard of living, which is a significant process for acquiring city’s success. However, as we know, a highly developed city normally has high price, such as Beijing and Shanghai, famous metropolis in China. On the contrary, city with lower food price, such as some remote areas, frequently means economic backwardness. This kind of city proves an evidence that prosperity and success of the city is closely linked to price, including food price. Therefore, leader is not supposed to rely on lowing the price in order to improve city’s status and pursue the great success.
As far as I am concerned, creating job opportunities for the unemployed is the best method to create a successful urban. If people get enough chance to search for work, they can make a living by earning money from their jobs. This phenomenon solves the difficult situation about food and house since people have the capacity to accumulate the wealth and they will be able to buy anything they desire in the future. Consumption drives economic development so that it helps city to ensure the prosperity. And besides, people with steady jobs gain more energy and enthusiasm and they are more willing to effort to make contribution to society. For example, before my cousin fond a job he laid in bed and did nothing valuable. But when he began to work for a company, he changed into hard working and refreshed feeling. I believe that if every citizen is addicted in improving themselves and striving for daily life, our city will gradually develop and generate numerous prosperities.
To put it in a nut shell, as a leader of city, I agree with creating job opportunities for the unemployed comes in handy of ensuring the prosperity and success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 571, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
... to reach successful aim for this city. even worse, this plan will be more likely to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, kind of, such as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2746.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 566.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85159010601 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66069760884 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505300353357 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 881.1 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2248076101 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19230769231 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449315069593 0.236089414692 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121558544757 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075474742565 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262198684159 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518232150154 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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