Even though today we are facing a more callenging and more complicated lifestyle, I think we are leading an easier life in comparison to people who were living a long time ago. Recent advances of science and technology is providing us with convenient lifestyle as time goes by.
First of all, today there are certainly vast number of digital devices which are readily at our service to carry out our daily tasks. For example, we could comfortablly pay our bills online without going to the bank in person. Another example is that the public transport system has made the travelling and commuting comfortable for employees or businessmen. If we consider the scenario that a merchant may have had to travel for days to get to a neighbor city in order to buy some products, we would profoundly comprehend the merit of current transport systems which benefit many businesses and industries.
Furthermore, we are living in the communication era. There are tremendous tools to interact with other people regardless of the distance they are living from us. The availablity of several communication tools has made it possible for students and scientists to explore different part of the world and pursue the career which they love. Currently, living abroad doesn't necessarily means abandoning the family. For instance, when I was a graduate student, I had a dream of working in the renowned companies of Germany; however, I was strongly attached to my family and I wanted to be in touch with them all the time. Accordingly, the only thing that could help me to deal with such a delimma was the possibility to video call them online and hold our relationship in a very cheap price thanks to the internet. Such benefits were not even imagineable during the days which our grandparents were young, the time which advent of the telephone would have been considered as a miracle.
Overall, our grandparents were leading a much simpler life relatively. However, scientists and engineers are simplifying our complex lifestyle so that I predict the life would get more comfortable for the next generations because of continueous enhancement of life quality.
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. 76
- Technology made children less creative than past 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign country. 86
- The extended family is less important now than it was in the past. 76
- The extended family is less important now than it was in the past. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ich they love. Currently, living abroad doesnt necessarily means abandoning the family...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04213483146 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88495453935 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5741990664 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258359674756 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735205293929 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793481774602 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158696807168 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721421591968 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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