Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that after the technology revolution and industries development the living condition changed significantly. Today, people live in very more reliable condition toward people had in the past. Contrary, to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that people in the past had been live in better mental condition because modern lifestyle provides a huge number of concern for people especially who live in the big cities. They say that today a lot of people are under mental illness like depression and stress, and they believe that these problems are the direct result of modern lifestyle. I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that life today is more comfortable than it was in the past.
First and foremost, in the past longevity was very small and a lot of people did not receive to adult. For example, not very far time ago, it was very natural that people did before 70 age. However, today, longevity increased remarkable, and it is more than 80 years old. The healthy level was very low and the infection illness killed people extensively. Conversely, in the twenty century and by huge development in science and medicine, scientist find the case of a lot of a number of infections and controlled epidemics and retreated these kinds of illness.
One another significant fact that should be taken into the consideration is that the people culture have been transformed and the number of educated people in the society increased considerably. For instance, my grandmother says that when she was a little girl, most of the family did not this allow to their children especially their female children for went to the school. Because they believed that education has not any benefit for their children. The parents preferred that their children learned their own skills and continue their parent's vacation. In the past, there was not any law that carying from children and some parents were forcing their children for hard works like farming or working in the factories. However, today there are a lot of laws and organization that watching children life condition. In addition, the public information about the impact of education increased in this shape that all of the parents try to provide the best possible condition and facilities for their children education and some superstition about useful less of education disappeared completely.
Finally, yet importantly, it is true that today people have more experience with stressful situations but it does not mean that people now present in the lower mental healthy toward past. Because, in the past, a lot of mental illness did not know and did not treat. Today, rising public information about mental health is to a reasonable increase in behavioral health and increasing happiness between people.
On the bases of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that life today is very easier than it was in the past. because of developing in science and medicine, improving people knowledge about education and an increase in people attention to their mental and physical health.
- one of the best ways that parents can help their children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. 70
- Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities 76
- In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 71
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- TPO 14 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 911, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... education increased in this shape that all of the parents try to provide the best possibl...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...is very easier than it was in the past. because of developing in science and medicine, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, it is true, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2591.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 509.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09037328094 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66634113727 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475442043222 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 812.7 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0673296541 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.772727273 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1363636364 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213993644312 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735558030522 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084888154445 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116235735361 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337116022036 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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