Comfort is the most significant life’s phenomenon which all the people seek to live it. Apparently, comfort has two types in the life. First is apparent or external comfort which directly depends on life’s goods and tools. The next one is spiritual comfort which is external. Happiness and satisfaction is its cause. Spiritual comfort is more important to anybody, but it is under effect of first one. So, these are inseparable and we have to have both as a comfortable life. In my opinion life today is more and more easier and comfortable than the past.
Nowadays, the life’s tools than the past and this makes the doing of life’s tasks easier than the past. For instance: in the past, when anyone went abroad it was so make a connection between them to be aware of themselves, bat now it is completely apposite. A person which live in abroad could manage a business and more other things through these connection tools.
Perspiration works need more human energy and cause the people to not enjoy the life and not being comfort, but now we have more machines that do these hard things instead the people. So, nowadays people use half of their energy to invent a machine to do the works and spend remained part of their energy to enjoy their life. However, it is applicable to each field but I just mention you the farming. There are lots of implant and harvesting machines that work instead farmers and makes farming easier, comfortable and enjoyable.
As doing tasks or working is easy due to working machines and being the life’s tools. People have more free time for doing another interesting thing. According to the needs people try to spend these free times on education and studying. By studying we could know ourselves, our God and what we have been created for? After that we automatically become comfortable.
Finally, if comfort is just doing works and tasks easier, so we are getting more comfortable day by day. But, if comfort is living the life without problems, so life in the past was easier and comfortable because of lake of problems in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 524, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...e. In my opinion life today is more and more easier and comfortable than the past. Nowaday...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun implant seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of implants'.
Suggestion: lots of implants
...just mention you the farming. There are lots of implant and harvesting machines that work inste...
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Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... God and what we have been created for? After that we automatically become comfortabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, finally, first, however, if, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80886426593 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59371506373 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501385041551 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3736633903 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9090909091 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4090909091 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29434658112 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093948386535 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967574969544 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175345264879 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930379135759 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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