Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Since the dawn of humanity, humankind has always tried to live comfortably, which developmental technology is evidence of this issue. Through recent years, the advance in technology has accelerated significantly. So, I believe I certainly enjoy a prosperous life than my grandparents due to several reasons. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into some conspicuous aspects, which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
First of all, it is significant to be mentioned that state-of-the-art technology speeded up recently, which brings about growing machines. The man has been replaced with robots and automated machines and there is a smaller need for human labor. As an instance, I remember that when I was a child my grandfather cultivates bean and took a long time about two weeks to harvest them with hand. However, recently I harvested bean approximately in one hour with a machine without any trouble. Subsequently, regarding the example, advanced technology and this machine era make life not only uncomplicated but also easier.
The second aspect of the current discussion is that families tend to have fewer children due to the social purposes of most of the countries. In the past, the number of family members was five or six but it is three or four now. It is clear that the revenue was divided between family members, and when the family is big, the members get less money and facilities. Although having more siblings has its advantages like their supports and assistance, life has been made difficult especially making financial problems for all members. To illustration, I know my father had many uncles and aunts and according to my grandparents, they even had to share their room with others and endured more problems. Today, parents want to have only one or two children that they can control financial matters including my family. I do not have any brother or sister so I do not have my grandfather’s difficulties. Consequently, the fewer kids one family have, withstand the less obstacle.
To sum up, based on all argumentations stated above, people experience a more comfortable life than in the past. By comparing my grandparent's life and my life, I understand I have an easier life due to the advancement of technologies and machines that I could use. Moreover, my grandparents live in a big family that they had to tolerate some problems that are the results of having a big family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03482587065 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0614928219 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57960199005 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4772633281 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.2 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199299764506 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519143750813 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578864821119 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114916050925 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635026461762 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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