Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
There is no denial to the fact that individuals would have contrasting views while comparing the quality of life between two different time periods. If I were to choose a side in this regard, I would definitely say that life today is much easier and comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. I shall develop a few ideas and elucidate them in the following paragraphs.
To start with, I would like to highlight the importance of accessibility that we enjoy today. In modern times, the globe has become a smaller place due to the presence of a virtual world. Starting from study materials to paying electricity bills, everything can now be done with the help of the internet. I have heard stories of how my grandparents would toil hard to get hold of study materials during their school days. Education was so much tough back then. However, these days online version of books, instructive video lessons and so many resources are available with just one click. Similarly, during those days letters were the only source of communication. Nowadays, cellphones can help us connect with anyone at any point of time. This is why I certainly believe that modern days have been ameliorated with increased accessibility.
Secondly, I would like to put forward a comparison on the absolute quality of life between the two time periods. My grandparents were refugees from Bangladesh who had migrated into India during independence. There was an ongoing political turmoil and risk to life used to be a constant threat. These days we are previledged to live in a safe world with satisfactory levels of serenity and security. We are free to venture out of our homes whenever required without any worries of any sort. Thus, quality of life in terms of security has definitely increased.
Lastly, it is needless to say that the standards of living have definitely upsurged so much in the last few decades. Availability of electronic devices, better means of communication, increase in income have led to a much easier life these days. My grandparents had to rely purely on newspapers and local radio to be abreast about current affairs. These days, information can be acquired through a mere tap on our smartphones. Travelling back then seemed to be a daunting task as long distance travel was supported mostly by steam engines. In modern days, aeroplanes have reduced a distance of thousands of miles to a few hours.
All being said, it is not really difficult to understand that quality of life as a whole has increased significantly over time. Thus, life these days are much easier than what it used to be when our grandparents were children.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, thus, while, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93303571429 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.864996878 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555803571429 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6411282049 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243590117323 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618094236862 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116799074601 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167994193878 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11829818336 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, thus, while, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93303571429 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.864996878 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555803571429 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6411282049 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243590117323 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618094236862 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116799074601 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167994193878 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11829818336 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.