Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
While there is no denial to the fact that different experts would have different views in this regard, according to me, owing to an extremely unsustainable lifestyle, our future generation is sure to be affected. I shall bolster my view with the help of three well-rounded explanations and examples.
First, the level of carbon emission these days have been skyrocketing. Be it emission from combustion of fuels or intake of animal proteins, with each passing year, the numbers have only been rising. Although some activities are necessary to lead our life, others are detrimental to our environment and is sure to affect future generations. It is not hard to understand that in the coming years, attributes like temperature and water level at the seas are bound to rise creating natural catastrophe like tsunamis, hurricanes and cyclones.
Second, the extreme unsustainable way of life of this generation would certainly create a situation of extreme scarcity in the years to come. Surely, we cannot survive without natural resources, however, the rate at which they are getting depleted is alarming. Hence, within a decade or so, we may experience phenomenon like communal wars to claim water sources, shortage of electricity and absolute elimination of coal and petrol.
Lastly, the environmental indices like air, water and soil quality is degrading day by day. As the pollution levels across the globe continue to rise, it is not hard to predict a world with air and water that is not satisfactory for lives. Our future generation would likely face problems pertaining to air pollution leading to a wide range of respiratory problems, degenerative diseases like cancers and continually arising pandemics.
Thus, it is very important for us to realize the impending dangers that leading from our way of living and rectify ourselves as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, so, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92097966823 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623333333333 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2876875782 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.692307692 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184035250008 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577543219016 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636844894263 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931547731212 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255728799492 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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