living with families for a longer time

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r living with families for a longer time or being independent, is better, for you...
^^
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...y individual living with parents is far more better then staying independently. However, a ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...ividual living with parents is far more better then staying independently. However, a perso...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
... living with parents is far more better then staying independently. However, a perso...
^^^^
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... living with parents is far more better then staying independently. However, a perso...
^^^^
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
...more about life until and unless he/she stay independently. Different people might h...
^^^^
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ducation. A person needs to be educated so as to get some job in the market. He/she has ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...hey might not get the quality education so as to sell themselves in the market. As a par...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...mselves in the market. As a paradigm, i a person choose away from his parents af...
^
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...market. As a paradigm, i a person choose away from his parents after his schoolin...
^^
Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ell it would be very difficult for him. Another reason for my belief is person a...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...etween what is wrong and what is right. As a result she/he might be the victim of ...
^^
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of 20 started working in some restaurant and at the end of the day he started goi...
^^
Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'smokes'.
Suggestion: smokes
...lcohol has become has habit and he even smoke with his friend. In this situation what...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ing with parents gratify every needs of a children as far as possible. There are no such p...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...children. So, staying with parents will benefits an individual from every aspects. For e...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 336, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ents even sell their precious jewelries so as to meet the needs of their children, for i...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to go school. For all these reasons, i believe that living with parents for lo...
^
Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...iving with parents for longer time will benefits both.
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61707317073 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45262670444 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507317073171 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1381565996 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.65 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265100240318 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923663839898 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148484465853 0.0737576698707 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210710605344 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179500080822 0.0645574589148 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.