living with families for a longer time
The issue raises the topic of whether living with families for a longer time or being independent, is better, for younger adult. Indisputably, for any individual living with parents is far more better then staying independently. However, a person will not learn more about life until and unless he/she stay independently. Different people might have different positions on this topic; however, in my perspective living with parents is better.
One reason for my belief is education. A person needs to be educated so as to get some job in the market. He/she has some skills using which she/he can earn money for their own survival and meet the basic needs. The time when one has just become adult she/he will be just the age of 18 or 19, at this age if one tried to escape away from their parents they might not get the quality education so as to sell themselves in the market. As a paradigm, i a person choose away from his parents after his schooling how can he manage all the resources like money, study materials own his own, if he manages as well it would be very difficult for him.
Another reason for my belief is person at the age of 18 or 19 cannot distinguish between what is wrong and what is right. As a result she/he might be the victim of bad company. To illustrate this let us take an example, 18 years John left his parents at the age of 20 started working in some restaurant and at the end of the day he started going to bar, drinking alcohol has become has habit and he even smoke with his friend. In this situation what is the motive of being independent and leaving the parents. Smoking, taking drugs and alcohol at the age of studying and making career. Hence, in the name of being independent an individual sometimes can hamper his/her life seriously.
Perhaps the best reason is, being with parents gratify every needs of a children as far as possible. There are no such parents who don’t want to meet the needs and desires of their children. So, staying with parents will benefits an individual from every aspects. For example, sometimes parents even sell their precious jewelries so as to meet the needs of their children, for instance lets say a car to go school.
For all these reasons, i believe that living with parents for longer time will benefits both.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r living with families for a longer time or being independent, is better, for you...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...y individual living with parents is far more better then staying independently. However, a ...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...ividual living with parents is far more better then staying independently. However, a perso...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
... living with parents is far more better then staying independently. However, a perso...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
...more about life until and unless he/she stay independently. Different people might h...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
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Suggestion: to
...ducation. A person needs to be educated so as to get some job in the market. He/she has ...
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...hey might not get the quality education so as to sell themselves in the market. As a par...
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...mselves in the market. As a paradigm, i a person choose away from his parents af...
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...market. As a paradigm, i a person choose away from his parents after his schoolin...
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...ell it would be very difficult for him. Another reason for my belief is person a...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...etween what is wrong and what is right. As a result she/he might be the victim of ...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...of 20 started working in some restaurant and at the end of the day he started goi...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'smokes'.
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...lcohol has become has habit and he even smoke with his friend. In this situation what...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
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...ing with parents gratify every needs of a children as far as possible. There are no such p...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...children. So, staying with parents will benefits an individual from every aspects. For e...
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Line 7, column 336, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
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...ents even sell their precious jewelries so as to meet the needs of their children, for i...
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Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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...to go school. For all these reasons, i believe that living with parents for lo...
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Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...iving with parents for longer time will benefits both.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61707317073 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45262670444 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507317073171 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1381565996 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.65 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265100240318 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923663839898 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148484465853 0.0737576698707 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210710605344 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179500080822 0.0645574589148 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.