making risky decision
The first reason coming to my mind is that being skillful enables people to become prosperous in their lives. As a matter of fact, people who have a lot of experience know how to do their tasks without spending a great deal of time, how to manage their issues. Nowadays, we are living in a competitive world which everything is changing so dramatically. For this reason, taking the risk can thereat their future. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better, There was a time that I had worked in an advanced company and I could save a hoard of money by working in that company for three years. Then, I had an idea to start a business in the field of information theory. I started to establish my business by taking a risk because the atmosphere of that field was so competitive I had failed and lost my all saved money. For this reason, had I took a risky decision, I would have established my business easily and become success easily.
The second reason why I agree with it is that when people make a risky decision and try to new things, they fall in the stressful situation. In fact, this stressful situation makes them nervous and has a negative impact on the result of their decision. For example, when I was a bachelor student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I had an interview with professor Nejati who is a well-known businessman in my country. Subsequently, He told me that a high percentage of people who take risky decision are the ones suffering from a lot of hard mental diseases because their mind is involved with their decision all the time and they always think about the what they are doing. As a result, the more people do what they are skillful enough in doing that, they are able to experience a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, well, for example, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54434250765 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63795459406 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535168195719 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5731981653 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144095448701 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473615912628 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896342652744 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12116668273 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996320363343 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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