Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Considering one of the most critical natural resources that is disappearing and needs to be saved, I am strongly inclined to describe forests regarding the their crucial effect of human life. It is obvious that human activity such as utilization of forests' lands, woods, etc can be attributed as the main reasons for disappearing the forests. I highly believe that the human life tightly depends on the presence of forests. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the existence of forests can be indicated as powerful factor for controlling the carbon dioxide emission. It goes without saying, due to convoluted mechanisms in the forest's trees the carbon dioxide can absorb and emit oxygen. Regarding the critical role of oxygen for all living things, there is a causal relationship between the air pollution in some areas on the one hand and the deficiency of forest coverage on the other hand.
Another primary reason can be indicated as the psychological effect of forest on the people. As the current psychological findings reveal, the people are encourage to maintain the some plants and flowers in their home. Moreover, I heard numerously that some psychologists prescribe for their sicks to hang around in the forests and inhibit any accommodation in the crowded cities. This can be denoted as a good example of impressive effect of forest visiting for the psychological revitalization of abnormal humans. In addition, considering the historical excavated evidence about the human orientation and the remarkable relation of earlier humans to the forest, I absolutely put emphasis on the importance of forest presence that is conducive to bring about much more alacrity to the human sprite.
Aside from the points I made above, the forest is categorically considered as an appropriate and sole place for the living of other creatures. For instance, the nest of most birds, wild mammals and reptiles are placed in the massive forest. The significant usage of forest is dramatically can endanger their life. It is undeniable than this event can lead to some problem for equilibrium in the life of humans.
Taking all of these perspectives into account, I cannot agree more the vital role of forests as the most important natural resource that should be saved regarding their critical benefits such as controlling the carbon dioxide emission, psychological effect and sole place for the living of other creatures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21836228288 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90850403526 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498759305211 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2074676769 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.705882353 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108824149127 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414153433887 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511465574581 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735567384563 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752185853201 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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