Many people believe that Global warming is the worst problem mankind faces today.
There are a lot of serious effects caused by global warming that can be observed over the whole world. Some of them are increasing the water level coupled with the growth of the number of natural disasters. Thus, I feel that global warming is one of the worst problems that humanity faces.
To begin with, global warming carries serious hardships for both mankind and animals. One of these problems is melting of glaciers in mountains and at the poles. It decreases the area of living for polar animals, such as polar bears. Besides animals, human population suffers as well, because the melting of ice or ice caps causes the increase of the water level in the oceans. For this reason, some of the coastal areas may sink under water. Sinking leads to huge land and money losses for island countries with low lands. By the same token people lose their homes. For example, this process could be observed in the Netherlands, Nigeria, and Bangladesh.
In addition, climate change leads to increase in a number of hurricanes and other natural cataclysms. To clarify, natural disasters happen more often in the current century than in the previous. Consequently, it causes social problems, because a lot of houses and facilities are destroyed during natural disasters. Many people lose their property and are forced to leave their homes. Furthermore, they are not the only victims. The population of the immediately unaffected by a cataclysm regions suffer too because the recovery burden is carried by them as by suffered region. For instance, Puerto Rico is impacted by a growing number of hurricanes because of global warming. Even though Puerto Rico is suffered side, other regions provide monetary help for recovery, so the influence of global warming is felt everywhere.
To summarize, global warming is responsible for plenty of negative effects that appear all over the world. The examples of such issues are flooding of coasts and growing number of cataclysms. The consequences of global warming are felt all over the world and it is the point that makes the problem of global warming so important and current.
- The number of people who are overweight is rising in Western society. Why is this the case? What can be done about it? 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Moai 3
- Studying foodways – what foods people eat and how they produce ,acquire,prepare,and consume them-is the best way to gain deep understanding of a culture. 50
- If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r level in the oceans. For this reason, some of the coastal areas may sink under water. Sin...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, to begin with, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03125 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55674084479 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519886363636 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4040626363 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202688407356 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561606553891 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777084935768 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134908963414 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533061866403 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.