Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It’s pretty hard to distinguish the role museums play in peoples’ lives. Some time ago they were commonly considered a thing of the past serving only for previous generations. Nevertheless, these days museums appear to become more popular among young people which happens due to a proper advertising company sponsored by authorities. But we’re not prone to cherishing illusions – museums will never achieve the same level of favor as other entertainment activities like soccer or cinema.
Interestingly, when it comes to travelling, almost every single person goes to the local museum with such urgency that it seems to be his direct obligation, rather then a possible pastime. As far as I am concerned, this phenomenon has extremely plain reasons.
First of all, foreign museums are more intriguing to visit as they are the perfect reflection of the local culture which we want get familiar to. The most significant national achievements are likely to be exhibited there. There is no need to mention that even a simple incogitant visit broadens one’s horizons. Secondly, visiting museums is in some way a symbol of maturity, and people believe it would be a shame if they didn’t go to museum. Sounds really silly, but still even a mindless visit is a certainly good thing. Personally, I am keen on studying art as it is a great joy to know the history, to understand the artist’s intentions. Sometimes understanding a piece of art also requires loads of intellectual resources which makes observance even more pleasant. At last, museums turn out to be a kind of a shelter where people escape from rough weather conditions like heavy rain or annoying sun.
In conclusion, after contemplating the reasons which were mentioned before, taking all the facts into account, I reinforce my conviction that museums are irreplaceable cultural centers which raise the historical and art awareness of population in the most proper way any of the sources can provide.
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...per way any of the sources can provide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18944099379 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01768925496 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.524837075471 130% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0353063305 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167139895669 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521768611731 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498254215 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824296714866 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517258768926 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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