In the urban live people build museums to keep the historic scripts and sculptures to define for the new generations. Also, museums continue variety kinds of traditional values and keep people close to their identity also, to keep the values and teach it to others.
Initially, people visit museum for many reason however, some people visit museum to obtain more knowledge and to enhance their ideas. Many museums have a great deal of information that give many people the desire to reach many museums as possible. There are many kind of museum around the world such Art museum, kids museum, historic museum and literature museum etc. Museum educate people in many ways by way of illustration, people who interested or specialist in History say that museums are the richest source of information for them. Moreover, people visit museums to see the movement and the mission of our live for example, before five years I went to the national museum in my country and I was shocked to see all the historic materials of my country from many decade ago I saw a scripts written in thousand years ago also I saw many sculptures in the old language shows how the lives was and who was living in our land . It was a great experience that I wish if I can do it again and meet the instructors who toke us in tour that day and he was very accurate and specific on his explanation.
Moreover, culture always keep only the valuable things and can be meaningful for next generation. Museums also have a great number of display for many artists for examples many people interested to see the unique prints that made by the famous artist however many people visit louver museum to see the Mona Lisa that made by Leonardo Da Vinci. Some people from their experiences when they travel to new places they go to visit the museum first to know the stories and the most important places that thy will visit in there journey for instance before four years I was in Turkey and one of my friend recommend that we should go to visit the museum first and when we went their I saw in the gallery multiple places that tourist prefer to see first and this places have more meaningful for Turkish people.
Finally, museum educate the people and show the deep culture and traditional for the countries and we should visit it and encourage others to visit and to take care of this places.
- It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast the knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Use specific reasons and example to 60
- Compare and contrast the advantages of city living and country living. Defend your preference. 73
- television has destroyed communication among friends and family agree or disagree 77
- How do movies and television influence people's behavior.? Give reasons and examples to support your answer. 71
- A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your locality.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory establishment? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
.... Initially, people visit museum for many reason however, some people visit museum to ob...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...ach many museums as possible. There are many kind of museum around the world such Art mus...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
...any museums as possible. There are many kind of museum around the world such Art mus...
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Line 3, column 787, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a script' or simply 'scripts'?
Suggestion: a script; scripts
...f my country from many decade ago I saw a scripts written in thousand years ago also I sa...
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Line 3, column 808, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...y decade ago I saw a scripts written in thousand years ago also I saw many sculptures in...
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Line 3, column 928, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lives was and who was living in our land . It was a great experience that I wish i...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...age others to visit and to take care of this places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62380952381 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3597256836 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459523809524 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.115438165 48.9658058833 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.833333333 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.6045352989 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40867179137 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175146096668 0.076458572812 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960583678937 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246810450123 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726146592786 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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