Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study aboard? Use specific reasons and example to explain your answer.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on why students sometimes choose to study outside their countries. Personally, I think most scholars prefer to study abroad because there are many significant benefits over there.
To begin with, when scholars have the chance to study in a foreign country, they can get a better education. There are many excellent universities located in different countries away from people’s hometown. These universities have a top ranking in some fields around the world. For example, in my hometown Saudi Arabia, most students struggle from the weakness of the education system in the country. Therefore, some of them tend to go and study in one of the best universities in the United States such as Harvard or Tufts University. By doing that, they will get a better education that allows them to broaden their knowledge. Furthermore, some foreign universities have unique specialties like marine technology or 3D art field. Thus, students can travel abroad and study in these fields if they do not have them in their countries.
Adding to the previous point, students will encounter a new culture when they have the ability to study abroad. They can learn new skills or expose to new cultural traditions. For instance, when my friend Rana went to Japan, she learned how to speak Japanese. Moreover, she was able to learn how to cook some local food such as Sushi.
On top of that, some scholars prefer to study outside their countries because they want to get an affordable tuition fee. Many universities located in undeveloped countries offer several degrees at a very low price. For example, last years, two of my cousins went to India and studied Pharmacy with only $1000 a year. However, the tuition fee in my hometown Saudi Arabia for pharmacy college exceeds $30000 a year. Thus, studying in these countries is affordable for many students.
In conclusion, I encourage students to study abroad. This is because they will get more advantages from study outside their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03869047619 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67092659054 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532738095238 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3146176407 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.619047619 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238595886123 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775707643582 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673884674188 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149035025422 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654028718617 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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