Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Nowadays, immigration is more common than past centuries. People want to immigrate for different reasons such as war, education, work or trade and are willing to change their situations. The majority of immigrants are students who seek an authentic degree in other countries and they are interested to expand their knowledge and experience. Although some people assert that immigration has more disadvantages than advantages, I believe that it gives them a lot of excellent opportunities which they could not obtain in the home country.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that top ranked university centralized in industrial countries. For example, Harvard University has the best medical school in the world so practitioners aspire to get graduated there. If a student can study medicine in that university, his future job with high salary is guaranteed. Hence, annually, one million studious and diligent pupils all over the world compete to get admission of famous university and enroll there because it is a huge honor and prestige.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that live somewhere away from family makes juveniles independent. They learn how to handle their problems and encounter difficulties. It is not simple to speak in a different language then rent an apartment, purchase merchandises, pay the bills and open an account in the bank. Not only does nobody else assist them to manage life hardships but also mentally they feel alone and cannot confide to people. Therefore, this makes them to grow and become mature.
Admittedly, expatriation is not a good solution for some people so they should not take this risk. If a person is really attached to his parents, it causes significant problems like addiction, improper relationship with opposite gender and bankruptcy. Nevertheless, this worry can be eliminated if fathers and mothers allow their children live independently since childhood and enforce them to accept some responsibilities. Thus, I still insist that positive aspects of expatriation are more than negative ones.
Due to the aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements, if apprentices are enthusiastic to be more knowledgeable and expert, immigration is a good option, otherwise, it is better to stay in their home countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, really, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06193968294 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628726287263 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.145770107 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140337437073 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367919285758 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364529019793 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704132176167 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441611929677 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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