Since from the school life to college, we all have friends and roommates. Everyone, knows that having the roommates good for rest of entire life because they are one who influences us to improve status in our carrier life as well as personal life. I want to explain some practical incident which happend in life. So, the quality of our roommate is very important.
First of all, we always tend to do something whatever our roommates do because they are stay very close to us and it is nature. If, he or she studies at early morning and going to the bed, then, we also follow the something what they do. Actually, it is very good and helps you to be healthy and focus on education. If, they are not going study and enjoying the party at late night. We have to face the negative consequence that will lead us to get poor grade in the school. Sometimes, it may end up serious health problems like physical, mental, and social stressful situation which not good for a student.
Secondly, he or she has to help us when there is need and the reason also should very reasonable and that must not abuse the relationship. For example, assume that, somebody rich but his roommate who is doing the part time in order pay his tuition, sometimes he could not get the enough money to his fee. In this situation, the roommate who is wealth family should consider situation of needy and he must help. It is a moral ethic as well. That way, he will definitely get blessing from friends whole heart no matter whatever the situation may be.
Thirdly, he or she could guide us life because they very well about educational background, talent, knowledge and our behaviour personality. For example, When I was in college, honestly speaking I was not aware about my physical structure and my roommate who was physical trainer and told me that my body is, so, I can start the build the body and keep it nice. As per his guidelines, I did whatever he told and at one point I got Mr. Coimbatore that great achievement happens of his good advice.
Finally, in order to be good in all aspects of our life, our roommate qualities are very essential that brings the reward or punishment depending character of our roommate. Be stay close with good roommates and away from bad friendship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... rich but his roommate who is doing the part time in order pay his tuition, sometimes he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, honestly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, as to, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5773955774 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47898276334 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53316953317 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.619428808 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.15 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.35 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159512354218 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522341974531 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419754216802 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955403066 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478594102872 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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