Means of transportation
Nowadays developing of technology have changed people’s lives in a different area. One of the fields has influenced by developing technology is the transportation industry. People access to a diversity of vehicle that made their life more convenient than the past. Every one of these vehicles has its own advantages and disadvantages. As I am concerned, I choose a private car as my favorite transportation means. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on arguments to supporting my views.
The first reason is that with a driving car, you will not concern about what weather condition outside is, you can drive in any weather. While with other vehicles, you will have a problem in some condition. To illustrate that ideas let’s consider the following example. I remember when I was a child my father had a bicycle, he went to work in scorching summer or cold weather in winter. Sometimes, this condition created a serious problem like when his foot damaged because of slipping the road. But after he saves enough money, he immediately bought a car, It was very convenient for him to go to the workplace without bothering by the weather.
The second reason is that you don’t need to worry about the schedule of a bus, train and other vehicles that usually some people use for commuting every day. For instance, one day you might like to wake up earlier than you usually wake up, but you aren't worried about arriving late to work because of you no with a little more speed you will be there on time.
Additionally, driving your car bring safety to you. Surely, when you derive yourself, you will follow the rules of driving guidance with more precision. For example, in my country, the rate of an accident that happens by the vehicle like a bus is very high because of careless of bus drivers, many of studies that made by driving organization showed that the main reason of accidents is driver's sleepiness. however, by driving yourself, you definitely would care about your life and your family that caused drive carefully.
By the way of conclusion, base on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that driving a car is the best means of transportation for some reasons like you could drive in any weather conditions, without worry about schedule of when the other vehicle go and ultimately, driving car is more safer than other transportations means.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ut arriving late to work because of you no with a little more speed you will be th...
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Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
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Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'transportations'' or 'transportation's'?
Suggestion: transportations'; transportation's
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87009803922 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79968378336 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1668766707 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.578947368 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4736842105 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836382949621 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272423438814 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640913668195 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631977418393 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852425238288 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.