Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
Globalization is a key factor when we talk about modern transportation and shipping. With technology constantly evolving we need practical delivery systems to keep the world moving. I will explain further, in details, why these two methods are making the world a better place.
First and foremost, the new shipping and transportation methods have been quicker than never before. In the past the delivery of goods use to be made by ships and it would takes ages to send a product from South America to Australia, but with the entrance of airplanes this can be done in no more than three business days, as a result people and companies have been able to save time and making more business. In addition to that, it is easy to receive parcels anywhere in the world within weeks and this is only possible due to the improvement of technology and constant research for better results.
Secondly, with the increase of people using shipping and transportation services to deliver their products, making these type of services extremely affordable for humble people. Delivery service companies are developing and improving their shipping methods, as a result they are increasing their clientele and expanding even further their final destinations for parcels and goods.
Moreover, new shipping and transportation services have enhanced their security system to avoid parcels and products to go missing. This is only possible due to new tracking technologies, GPS and new satellites available in the market. A good example are parcels and products now sent to the other side of the world can be easily tracked in real time from your personal computer.
In conclusion, modern transportation and shipping systems have changed and evolved how we communicate, how we do business and definitely how we live.
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- Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...fore. In the past the delivery of goods use to be made by ships and it would takes ...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...ds use to be made by ships and it would takes ages to send a product from South Ameri...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s days, as a result people and companies have been able to save time and making m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18835616438 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86231516352 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7803007079 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268276475621 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869419551698 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503371420893 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133623428265 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546384379686 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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