The advancement in technology has made our lives easier and better. The development in transportation can not be overlooked. I agree that in today's world the transportation and shipping have become better than earlier. Thus, our lives have improved a lot. I am saying this due to some reasons that I would like to explore in the essay.
First and foremost, nowadays, transportation has become faster and reliable than earlier. The technology has made the transportation faster. Earlier people used to travel on horses or carts but with the invention of cars, trains and aeroplanes the scenario has changed a lot. Now travelling has become easier we can travel from one country to another within few hours. I am saying this by my personal experience. My brother is living in different country, due to faster transportation it is possible to meet him whenever I want to. The world has come closer than ever and credit for this can be given to advancement in transportation.
Secondly, the reliabilty on modern transportation has increased. Earlier, the transportation was not reliable. Now, the people travel from one place to another successfully and on time. The delay in schedule of a transport happens very few times. Thus, the latest transporation is better than earlier.
Last but not the least, due to modern transportation it is possible to ship and receive things within few days. I would like to share an example related to this. My friend had an emergency knee surgery, the hospital ordered the artificial knee which was needed within 2-3 days. Due to fast transportation the artificial knee was shipped within one day. Thus, the doctors operated her within the time frame. There is one more example, I had to prepare for an examination, I needed a book immediately that was available online but not in book stores. I ordered the book and received it within two days. I got the book in time so I was able to prepare nicely for the exam. Therefore, it can be said that faster transportation has contributed to faster shipping.
Thus, the zest of the above discussion is, nowadays transportation have become better and it is making our lives a lot easier than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'transport'.
Suggestion: transport
...y and on time. The delay in schedule of a transport happens very few times. Thus, the lates...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9868678975 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479674796748 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 12.0 3.08781362007 389% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.31838369 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3333333333 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18518518519 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299425330134 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805544000739 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842273914415 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179777704474 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807170032408 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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