Movies and television are the most common thing in our daily life, do you agree?
I completely agree with this view.In fact, as long as the correct use of these can bring benefits. But not for young people. In this technologically advanced age.Young people may be less affected by the good than the bad. Movies and television became the most common thing in our daily life. And It is sure to influence the children to some extent.Because their self-control is still rather weak. I can't control my behavior yet. So ,It is the electronic products that will bring them more negative effects than positive effects. Take me, for example. I had a period of time, Watching movies and TV like crazy ,That my grades were down.Luckily I found it in time and corrected it.Even though it relaxes us. But it's going to take a lot of our time. To make our goal impossible. Thus affects the normal study and the life.
So I think. Movies and television have far more negative effects on young people than positive ones. Because they don't have complete control over their behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, thus, for example, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 1977.66487455 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 407.700716846 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82558139535 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.48103885553 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81404958514 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691860465116 0.524837075471 132% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 618.680645161 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.8196577057 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1666666667 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205291345005 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053129362364 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816845659338 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137704379925 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724063203015 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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