Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on behavior of young people
After witnessing the boom of technology development, people pay more attention to its effect on youngers. The controversy is surrounding that whether movies and televisions exert more negative influence or more positive influence on young people. Some people are of the point that they are beneficial for teenagers, because they enable people to get relaxed in their spare time. In my opinion, however, they pose a threat to young people’s development.
One of the most interesting aspects of the ongoing discussion that demands a keen contemplation is that watching television excessively exerts negative influence on people’s health. For one thing, because of lacking of self-control, young people tends to get addicted to watch television. Long time exposure in front of electronic devices are detrimental to their eyes. Plus, if people stay up till very late to watch movies and television, they cannot have sufficient sleep in night, resulting in a very groggy body and a messy mind the next day. Moreover, long time sinking in sofa without enough exercises will give rise to multiple physical problems, like gaining weight, hurting spinal cord and so on. As you can see, that’s how watching movies and televisions pose a threat to people’s health.
Another important aspect of the current discussion which needs to be reflected is that watching too much televisions and movies adversely affect people’s relationship. One of the crucial steps in maintaining the relationship within a family is to communicate each other and be there to be a good listener whenever it is needed. With the tight schedule of work, the time for people to spend with family members is limited. If people immerse themselves in watching television during their free time, the quality time they can invest in their families will be reduced significantly, resulting in a very cold and distinct relationship. Therefore, entertainments, like televisions and movies, cause damage to family relationship.
Admittedly, watching televisions and movies is a excellent way for youngers to relax time after study. However, due to their natural instincts, it is very harmful for their health and relationship.
From what have been discussed, I draw the conclusion that watching televisions and movies have negative impacts on the young due to the adverse effect it brings to their health and family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for one thing, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38726790451 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05499595786 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1400798837 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291171988696 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917713299976 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867854979938 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182645889058 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110200880933 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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