movies and television should convey what sprirts to audience
In the contemporary society, it is undeniable that movies and television have had an influence on people’s daily life. Hence, the spirits conveyed by the movies and television are of essential importance. Some people think they just watch whatever they want to watch no matter whether the value of the movie or television is suitable for them. From my perspective, however, movies and television are supposed to express positive spirits to people.
First and foremost, movies and television should teach people lessons about life. To be more specific, the necessary lesson is mutual honest. It is commonly known that being honest is an essential quality of people. If students make lies to their professors and copy others’ homework and essay, once they are found not honest, their professors may criticize them and even their credits are lessened by a large extent. Hence, movies and television play an important role in conducting people spirits about being honest. For instance, Bad Genius state a story about a genius girl help her friends to pass Scholastic Assessment Test. They succeed the test, however, in the end the heroine voluntarily surrender herself and the whole things come to obvious. This movie teach people to be honest and every crime will meet an end.
In addition, movies and television should communicate the idea of non-discrimination. Nowadays, the society is rife with all types of discrimination---the sexual discrimination, homosexual discrimination, racial discrimination and so on. These discrimination brings harm to the people all over the world with different background. Just think about it that the diverse culture in some countries are in derision by people from other states. The really heart-breaking thing is mutual disdain between people. It is assuredly important for movies and television to express the spirits of non-discrimination. For example, Call Me By Your Name is a movie that talk about the sexual discrimination. It meticulously state the love story between men. After it had been on, it aroused great attention in the society and even some states support for same sex marriage.
Finally, movies and television are supposed to express a strong and positive life attitude to people. That’s to say ‘never give up’ which is of essential importance for people to achieve their dreams. Movies and television are supposed to teaches us that we do get what we want, if we know exactly what we want and want the right thing. We must make sure that our clearly defined goals are achievable. A superficial claim like ‘ I wanna be a millionaire’ brings nothing. But if the movies and television express the ideas like that by carefully planning and relevant persistence, we have no reason to fail, even if the methods we use are problematic, many still finally attain great achievement. Such kind of spirits bring people energy and positive attitude about life.
Overall, these are my opinions about what movies and television should express. But the answer is never the end.titanic had brought a worldwide uproar by its extolling of fascinating immortal love; Primary Color and Wag the Dog met the national debates and duties of the president of the United States.;antiwar movies such as Tears of the Sun and All Quiet on the Western Front......
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'this discrimination' or 'These discriminations'?
Suggestion: This discrimination; These discriminations
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Message: Did you mean 'states'?
Suggestion: states
... sexual discrimination. It meticulously state the love story between men. After it ha...
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Suggestion:
...e states support for same sex marriage. Finally, movies and television are suppo...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'teach'.
Suggestion: teach
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, really, so, still, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2773.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 536.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17350746269 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99195045331 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514925373134 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 866.7 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5176055137 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4333333333 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248896050948 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730474849953 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931247394429 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151058859218 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526177489993 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.