Moving from place to place can be stressful but can also bring new opportunities. Do you prefer to live in one place for a long time or to move somewhere new every few years? Use specific reasons to explain your opinion?
People migrate for different reasons. But I think that moving from places frequently would create problems and difficult situations that are irreversible in nature. So I believe that staying at one place is more intelligent due to the following reasons mentioned below.
To begin with, residents know their neighbours well in old neighbourhood.therefore it is easy to make friends and can trust others. In contrast if a new resident occupies a house it’s not easy to adjust with them especially if they belong to a different community. It might create trouble there and if any problems occurs no help would be offered since they are newcomers. Likewise, newly moved place might not be even friendly or welcoming in the first instance.Hence, it’s always good to stay in the old premises itself.
Furthermore, strong connections are based on long lasting friendships. This will help people to start a life in the community. For instance, if an old resident starts a shop nearby people living in the community would definitely help and allow the business to proper. This is because people have faith and trust with each other and are familiar with them too. In contrast, a new commer starting a business will not grow as fast as the old residents. This is due to the fact that he is new and always marketing is needed for a enterprise to flourish, without enough support from the people nothing will happen. This again states that migrating all the time is not a good option.
Additionally, without an excellent reputation in the field of work it’s not easy to get position in a company. Their spouses would also face this problem.For example, the kids will also have to face difficulty to join a new school make friends. Eventually this would create tensions in the family. But if properly preplanned and offered a job in the new place it would be heaven. Slowly it will be possible to create an address in the community.
To reiterate, migrating is not a good option for people until and unless proper arrangements are made this is because not all changes will end in success. There would be difficulties and tensions in the due course of life. Hence, I prefer to stay at one place where I can live harmoniously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88188976378 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87380360918 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517060367454 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7183832626 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5454545455 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3181818182 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208635614172 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603081596118 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629247844715 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127987825555 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403617567999 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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