The music you listen to says a lot about the kind of person you are. How far do you agree with this?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Each of us has a memorable situation which can associate with a particular kind of music. That can vary from sadness or happiness and a song with a lyric that sounds would reveal them. It is my firm believe that music we listen to says many things about kind of people we are for a number of reasons and I will develop some supportive explanations in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, we humans are emotional creatures and easily influenced by pleasant songs that approached our heart. By listening a particular song we elicit feeling in us that might be different. Moreover, a melody is sentimental because it might reminds us some past events in our lives and then the trenchant feeling ramps up. As a result, some people even cry when listening songs cause they are deeply involved in their memories associated with the type of song. Those people who express kind of emotions by hearing a music are genuine, because they don't have the ability to conceal their real being in front of others. For example, my grandmother is a big-hearted person and every time when she listens to classical music she cries. I decided to make a surprise for her 65th birthday and bought a ticket for a live concert and she was so exited and happy.
In addition some people, especially teenagers covet to affiliated themself into a particular group that listen to particular music. Although, don't like the music they emulate others in the clique and want to become same, because they considers themself as trendy and one step ahead. They dress up and behave in some ways urged by the music, therefore it is readily recognizable how they want to look like and eventually be their personality.
Heavy metal music is a compelling example of how people keen of that style behave. It is often denote as an aggressive music that black color appears in clothes' style illustrating the death. Consequently, heavy metal aficionados are in an ebullient mood and some of them even inclined to malefaction. It is easy to understand a person's personality, if he or she has a demeanor and outfit that are different.
In conclusion, a music is an important factor to reveal a real personality of somebody. When a person has experienced crisis like separation with loved one and listen to a song that reminds him that bad moment, countenance shows that person is deeply sensitive. Also, teenagers who want to look respectful or more than others, often joint a group that follow principles and listen to aggressive music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80930232558 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72762047703 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53023255814 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6014705529 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152759228049 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469071030985 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382397630432 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921264556737 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401510119048 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.