my family
My family is the best one in the world. we are very united because we are always to each other no matter what happen or what it is needed.
my family is composed by my father, 3 sisters and I. My mother died three years ago so now its just us against the world. that is one of the reasons we are really united because we understood that the life its too short and its stupid wasted the time in things that are not really important. after that, we get really closed, we stared to do more thing together, staring new traditions and do the things good how she had been wanted.
Now a days my two big sisters are married and with one child each one so i live with my little sister and my dad. we continue been united, and doing things together no matter distances, that is why i love my family and I had never changed for nothing in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...My family is the best one in the world. we are very united because we are always t...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...r what happen or what it is needed. my family is composed by my father, 3 sist...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...o so now its just us against the world. that is one of the reasons we are really uni...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...n things that are not really important. after that, we get really closed, we stared t...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...things good how she had been wanted. Now a days my two big sisters are married and with...
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Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...gs good how she had been wanted. Now a days my two big sisters are married and with...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... married and with one child each one so i live with my little sister and my dad. ...
^
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... live with my little sister and my dad. we continue been united, and doing things ...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...gether no matter distances, that is why i love my family and I had never changed ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 52.1666666667 25% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 1977.66487455 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 407.700716846 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12727272727 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04787511098 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 212.727598566 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 618.680645161 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7932751649 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.125 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.45110844103 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339353926069 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21590455845 0.076458572812 282% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.227405874493 0.0737576698707 308% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258986171288 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695221086451 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 86.8835125448 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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