In my opinion success requires a lot of hard work and persistence. If we ask a successful person how it was to become a successful person he or she will answer that it’s not easy but it’s not impossible. If a person wants t become successful then he or she should acknowledge in what profession are they good at and after that they have to plan in what university they should study and what classes they should take.
First of all, in my opinion, the person should plan who he or she wants to become and after that they should be ready for the challenges and obstacles and they never have to rely on luck. For example if a student in a university takes all it’s time on preparing for exams will have high grades and will have a greater chance of having a good job, but if he or she parties all the time and does not spend any of his or her time on studying will eventually fail the exam.
Second of all, I think that while the person plans his or her future profession he or she should examine that profession carefully. For example, as I’m a student I was planning to become a computer scientist and once I went to some computer classes and I’ve seen how people study and learn about computers and eventually I changed my decision of becoming a computer scientist mainly because I realized that it’s not what I was expecting. So sometimes it happens when students choose a profession without examining it and they get puzzled in university and often change their profession.
Finally, some people suggest that success is all about taking chances or risks, but they are wrong mainly because chances are not infinite and risks cannot always bring what the person was expecting. In my opinion, the student that is thinking that there is always a second chance and does not take the first one will fail somewhere maybe not in university but in life surely.
All in all, I think that there is no such a thing as getting successful person by a luck. People spend a lot of time and effort in being successful and there is no doubt that one they will achieve their goal as being a successful person.
In my opinion success requires a lot of hard work and persistence. If we ask a successful person how it was to become a successful person he or she will answer that it’s not easy but it’s not impossible. If a person wants t become successful then he or she should acknowledge in what profession are they good at and after that they have to plan in what university they should study and what classes they should take.
First of all, in my opinion, the person should plan who he or she wants to become and after that they should be ready for the challenges and obstacles and they never have to rely on luck. For example if a student in a university takes all it’s time on preparing for exams will have high grades and will have a greater chance of having a good job, but if he or she parties all the time and does not spend any of his or her time on studying will eventually fail the exam.
Second of all, I think that while the person plans his or her future profession he or she should examine that profession carefully. For example, as I’m a student I was planning to become a computer scientist and once I went to some computer classes and I’ve seen how people study and learn about computers and eventually I changed my decision of becoming a computer scientist mainly because I realized that it’s not what I was expecting. So sometimes it happens when students choose a profession without examining it and they get puzzled in university and often change their profession.
Finally, some people suggest that success is all about taking chances or risks, but they are wrong mainly because chances are not infinite and risks cannot always bring what the person was expecting. In my opinion, the student that is thinking that there is always a second chance and does not take the first one will fail somewhere maybe not in university but in life surely.
All in all, I think that there is no such a thing as getting successful person by a luck. People spend a lot of time and effort in being successful and there is no doubt that one they will achieve their goal as being a successful person.
- All over the world we lose natural resources, for example, water, trees, fuel and so on but, the most important resource is clean water. Without clean water there is no chance of living on Earth. And in my opinion, it’s a huge problem for everyone on Ea 70
- The article discuses three theories that try to explain how the hydrogen can be used as a gasoline for cars. In the lecture, however, the professor challenges these claims. The first theory that the article makes is that the hydrogen is very common on the 60
- The article discuses the paintings that Rembrant painted and it claims that they are doubts that it was painted by him. But the professor challenges these points.The first point that article makes is that the woman who was painted in Rembrants picture was 60
- The article discuses the advantages of using and providing organic food. In the lecture, however, the professor challenges these claims.The first point that article makes is that organic foods are much better for human health, mainly because they do not c 73
- In my opinion progress is always good mainly because people get chance to distinguish good and bad and they surely have to understand that progress always leads to a better life. Nowadays a lot of people are achieving progress and I think that most of the 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tually I changed my decision of becoming a computer scientist mainly because I re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, then, while, as to, for example, i think, no doubt, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 13.8261648746 217% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55064935065 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49999696407 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423376623377 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2902711776 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0833333333 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449227899979 0.236089414692 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205242559615 0.076458572812 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207928668792 0.0737576698707 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264481283974 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185768951519 0.0645574589148 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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