Name a world leader you think is important.
History is filled with the biography of great people, which had significant effect in the world. In this regard, some of them had qualities that differentiated them from other typical people. In my opinion, Nelson Mandela has outstanding properties in compared to other famous people.
First, one of the important characteristics of Mandela has to do with his leadership power, which introduced him as a powerful politician in the world. There are three various leadership qualities in Nelson which was very outstanding. First, on the political level, he tolerated diverse difficult moments in the freedom direction and after a long time he could bring the taste of democracy to his people. In this way, he released the country from foreign domination and gifted the people confidence, ambitious, hopefulness, and happiness senses. In economic point of view, he had important role in blossoming of economic and let his people towards the industry progression without any Interference of western countries, as well as provided an unmatched position that the society be independence in exploiting the natural resources and mines. Last but not least, his significant contribution during the crisis was the diminishing of the race discrimination. He learned to different people all around the world that human beings with various beliefs, religious, colors, and nationality have the same human rights, and the criteria of privilege among the people is only their help and invention for other humans. Therefore, he was a great teacher for world's people and learned them that the enduring achievements resides in success attained through perseverance and through surmounting formidable obstacles.
Second, his personality introduced him as a important and influential leader to the people. His peaceful and calm personality led him to making logical decisions without any precipitancy in critical moments. Before the executing his plans, he communicated with experts and share the ideas with them, and on the other hand he spoke people about some programs. With this in mind, African people had great deal of trustworthy to his schedules and respect him in any given circumstances. Furthermore, people accepted his faith and knew him an honest man with righteous manners so that Mandela used this property in unifying whole nation towards the revolution and helped them to fulfill African ideals and desires in getting rid of colonialism and western intervention. In addition, Mandela had an intensive will power in achieving his desires. He navigated different people to the apex of humanity and suggested that the key factor of moving towards the success is converting defeats into the stepping-stones to making progress and triumph. During his prison, he never frustrated and pursued his freedom goals, and as a result, nowadays he has made the world a better place to live for all strata of African society and other nations all over the globe.
In conclusion, although there exist various people in the world who have affected everyone's life, I personally believe that Nelson Mandela played a crucial role in removing the race discrimination according to his leadership ability and personality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269439421338 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.121157323689 0.158761421928 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106690777577 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0162748643761 0.046263068375 35% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0669077757685 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137432188065 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0343580470163 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96081063465 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0216998191682 0.0309702414327 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101265822785 0.0887237588012 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00361663652803 0.0209618222197 17% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0108499095841 0.0139019557991 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3201.0 2387.08602151 134% => OK
No of words: 503.0 408.028673835 123% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36381709742 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.435387673956 0.338922669872 128% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.341948310139 0.251872472559 136% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216699801193 0.174417080927 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.163021868787 0.112833075102 144% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96081063465 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528827037773 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 63.7976563634 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.15 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8772973829 48.84282405 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.05 120.699889404 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.15 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 59.3448310139 45.7405998639 130% => OK
Elegance: 2.1592920354 1.45489161554 148% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0439724770872 0.300154397459 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109685320856 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0536647403218 0.0752933317313 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.550285991975 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163281241136 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0230755904141 0.114077575197 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358443621687 0.0781384742642 46% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.472233725009 0.336927656856 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.142111048112 0.067059652881 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0373289838861 0.210909579961 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00697628647148 0.0618886996521 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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