Neighbors are essential parts of our lives. Many people may have a different opinion about how a good neighbor should be. Some people may exaggerate this whereas others do not ignore. According to me, neighbors must have a few basic features, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, I believe that if the neighbor is reliable is crucial. People want to trust people whom they live side by side. No one wants to think about their families or houses when he or she is not at home. Prophet Muhammad says that Muslims are people whom their neighbor is in safe from them. For example, when I studied at the university, I rented a flat with my friends. Many families were living in the apartment, in which we lived. So, they saw us as a threat against women and young girls since were single. As the time passed, they knew and started to trust us since we always helped them for every situation like moving some furniture or giving a lecture to their children for free. What I am saying is that a good neighbor should be reliable and helpful.
Secondly, people want to see respect from other people so; they want to see like those people around them. Life is hard and neighbors should not make it harder by disturbing each other. My university life is a compelling example of this. Once, a group of students moved our apartment, which I mentioned above. Initially, we warned them about being careful and respectful against families in the building. They ignored us so; they would listen to music loudly and disturb the girls when they entered the building or faced with the stairs. In the end, all families decided to get rid of them from the apartment. That is why being respectful is a good feature of a neighbor.
In conclusion, I believe that a good neighbor should have more than what I mentioned above. These features are the basic characteristics of a good neighbor. Since they are fundamental features of being a human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...rate this whereas others do not ignore. According to me, neighbors must have a few basic featur...
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Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sic characteristics of a good neighbor. Since they are fundamental features of being ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6387283237 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46990810672 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531791907514 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9254650314 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.875 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283184712279 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858998712145 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804484493557 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193772357903 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426392066038 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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