One of most important relashionships in sociaty in the relationship between neighbors. With the changement in the modern life, the relashionships between neughbors has also changed. However I personaly strongly beleive that three major qualities should be in a good neighbor.
Firstly, neighbors should respect each other’s privacy. Having neighbors you should not spy on their houses or activities, you should always keep a distance and respect their private life. Some people like to spy on their neighbors and share gossips about then with other neighbors. If ever you hear gossips about your neighbors from someone, you should be aware of that person, because they can share gossips about your family the same way they did with others. Moreover, you should try to stop them and not encourage them by asking them more question about that neighbor. A good neighbor is someone that values privacy and if he hears or see something by chance, he keeps it as a secret instead of spreading the gossips.
Secondly, neighbors should always help each other in times of need. I still remember when my grandmother died all neighbors came to show their condolences and suggest if they can help with something. I remember that all members of my family were really sad that even receiving people and preparing food for them was tiring. Some of our neighbors helped by preparing some traditional meals and cakes at their houses with their own money and show up at the door with food that was more than sufficient. We were all touched by that move and we will always be thankful for them.
Lastly, neighbors should share responsibility of the cleanliness of the neighborhood. The neighborhood reflects its habitant way of thinking. If the neighborhood is always dirty that means its habitants are dirty and vis versa, therefore all the neighbors should be concerned by the neighborhood’s cleanliness.For instance my father and the other neighbors signed an agreement on taking turns cleaning the streat, collecting the trash and planting trees and plants. Since that day our neighborhood has become cleaner and more beautiful. In addition neighbors need to raise their kids on respecting the other neighbors properties, and not cause them troubles.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that we need to treat our neighbors the way we wish to be treated, we need to draw private life boundary, be respectful and helpful and share the responsibility of protecting the neighborhood and keeping it clean.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13480392157 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90236545767 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6601096557 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169672965443 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577255900972 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447905932763 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914742132214 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405667533327 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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