Governments are the ones who decide where the public money should be invested to bring maximum profite to their countries.While some people think that the government should spend more money in support of athlets,others think that art is more worthy. I strongly believe that sports are more worthy for three compelling reasons.
firstly, sports catch bigger audience than arts, thus government can benefit more from the investment in sports. nowadays the number of people who enjoy sports such as football, baseball or basketball are much numerous that people who visite the art galaries. the variability of the kinds of sports and the availability of the events brings a lot of audiance. people can watch the events from home or go to the stadiums to assest to the games. the government can benefit from the huge audiance by putting commertial belboared in the entrence of the stadium or around the audiance chairs. Moreover channels pay big amounts of money to be able to air the games. the government can benefit from these games and make more money that it was invested for the support.
Secondly, athlets need more money that artists. athlets in order to be ready for any sort of game or competition need to go through long periodes of trainings and coaching. these trainings are usually expensive since sometimes coaches from abroad are needed. In addition all athlets need physical therapy before and after the games. this kind of therapy is very expansive since it includes a variaty of activity such as massages, ice baths, relaxing training etc. the athlets can't afford the price of these therapies, hence support from the gornment is surly needed. Moreover a lot of athlets get injuries that sometime require expansive surgeries.
lastly, athlets are more famous than painters or other artists since they are more active. athlets have a very busy calender, if they are not participationg in games they are surly doing charity activities.As a result, they are always representing their countries. So they need to be supported themost to give a good image of their homeland. In the other hand artists don't usually like to be known or seen, they are more likey to have a misterious side in their personalities. In additing some artists like to live freely to express out they feel and do what they like.
All things considered, both art and athlitics sould be supported from the goverment, nevertheless the athlets bring more profites to the govenment that artists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in addition, kind of, sort of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03155339806 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64619994775 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51213592233 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5745774696 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2272727273 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209245890944 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603438337842 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593765804313 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127537146233 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442230310274 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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