There is no doubt that our neighbors are quite important and essential part in our lives. We spent large amount of times with them each day. There are so many characteristics that should be in any person. In my point of view, I believe that helpfulness and kindness are the most important qualities that should be in any neighbor. I feel that way for two reasons supported by two examples, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, having a helpful neighbor is a great addition and a huge benefit for any individual. Of course, everyone in any small part of world do his need neighbor's help in one occasion at least. We always have problems and unexpected accidental events, therefore, we always need somebody to stand with us. To illustrate this idea let us consider the following example. I remember when I was freshman at Jordan University of science and Technology, studying civil engineering, I have a trouble with the online registration process. Fortunately, one of my neighbors was a student the same university, so I went to him told him what the problem I have. He did not hesitate to help me to register and edit my schedule. moreover, he went with me at the next day to the university as a guided student for me.
Secondly, I think that being kind is important as much as being helpful. Kind neighbors will add much flavor to our daily life. We can do many activities and spend lots of hours with them feeling bored. For instance, I have a wonderful friend, Salem, that he is living behind us. Every weekend we do lots of activities and go to various places together. I always enjoy with the time I spend with him.
I conclusion, there are many important qualities our neighbors should have. Helpfulness and kindness are two fundamental and meaningful characteristics everyone should look after in his neighbors.
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- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people in the past 60
- Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 721, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...lp me to register and edit my schedule. moreover, he went with me at the next day to the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for instance, i feel, i think, no doubt, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76086956522 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8280332524 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2578827322 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105704194597 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343533946278 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407783928493 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069587850675 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0098273642314 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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