Nobody doubts that we live in a rapidly changing wourld. Almost everything we used to do and to use hundred years ago are changed now. some individuals argue that we now are less happy and less satisfiesd with our lives than were in the past; others disagree. In my point of view, I can say with the utmost confidence that the changes we see today are making our lives better place to live in for two fundamental reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, these changes make our life much easier that it used to be. The rapidly changing in technology for example, make the things that we did not even imagine to do in the past posiible these days. To illustrate this idia let us consider the following examples. Who can imagine one hundred years ago that we will be able to communicate with someone in different country or even in different contenent just in seconds? who also can imagine our lives tody with the internet? We can get into any information we need just by few clicks instead of readings many books form cover to cover seeking one piece of information. Moreover, no one can deny that cars also have a greact positive effect on our lives today.
Second, these changes have added more fun and antertainment to our wourld. Every minute appears new different things you can experience such as video games, new kinds of books and others. To illustrate this point from different perspective, let me tell you the following example from my own life. Last month, I traveled to Germany with my family. This Trip made it possible for me to meet new different people and gain valuable experience that I had never known before. Moreover, It allowed me to expand my social network and broaden my horizons. We will not be able to make this fantastic and outstanding trip with the changing we have today.
In conclusion, eventhough some people are not happy with the changing that happened and still happen in our wourld, I see these the advantages of these changes are much more important than the disadvantages. Our lives become easier and more enjoyable than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ost everything we used to do and to use hundred years ago are changed now. some individ...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... use hundred years ago are changed now. some individuals argue that we now are less ...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagine doing'.
Suggestion: imagine doing
...e, make the things that we did not even imagine to do in the past posiible these days. To ill...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...in different contenent just in seconds? who also can imagine our lives tody with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70189701897 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49642777665 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514905149051 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9068622321 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204895772293 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652126631084 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753338768638 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143745953307 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806024190458 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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