we are living in small communities in apartments and consequently we are in a relationship with the other flat members in other words our neighbours. Since we share the same spaces, flats, rooms or else with them, they need to carry some significant criterias in order to have a good relation. I will investigate these specialities in terms of emotionally, ethically and socially in this essay.
Emotionally, these people who live near or close to us must be trustable because otherwise we might feel disturbed and if we want to live in safe and confident, we need to trust our neighbours. However, this is not only up to us since we cannot control the behaviors or actions of any individuals. of course we have to show our best and give the feeling of trust but, our neighbours also have to provide the right conditions so we can built a mutual trust. Why is that so important? the reason of its importance is coming from the dependency to the other members of the society. For example, you forgot your keys at work and do not have anywhere to stay thus, you knock your neighbours door and ask for help. Asking for assistance from a stranger might be dangerous but not from a reliable neighbour.
Ethically, we need to respect eachothers lives and privacy. a neihbour must be respectful to our boundries and life styles even if they don't approve or support or like as long as we do not harm others and ourselves. for instance, a person might be working at night and resting during the day and the other one might be the opposite. Both of them must be careful when they are home and provide a good environment for the others. this situation benefits to the both sides because a healthy relationship grows in time and everone feel peaceful.
Socially, sometimes we would like to have a cup of coffee and chat with others but, we would not want to leave our place. That times we call a neighbour and ask them to join us to go in to the next door. This is a great opportunuty to get socialized and clear our head moreover, have a nice friend lives nearby. Furthermore, they can introduce us to their friends, colleuges, relatives, bussiness partners and so on hence, we can enlarge our network and area. Maybe, we can find a better job, university a girlfriend/boyfriend and etc.
As a conclusion, I would like to have a neighbour who has the qualities that I explained above in order to live happily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, of course, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58837209302 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80423557413 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523255813953 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8529590341 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9523809524 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4761904762 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136740742984 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416507393566 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525872065031 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912066648997 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687778788059 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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