Without a doubt, the foods are crucial for people's life. According to scientists, the name of the this era is called technology. Thanks to the technology, food has become much easier to prepare. In today's hectic life it is an astonishing fact that people from all walks of life differ greatly in their attitudes towards this phenomenon. We find that some people hold the idea great idea that easy prepared food improved the how people live, on the other hand, others may oppose the idea. In my perspective it is better to choose former. So, as Hollywood celebrities say: "Lets cut the chase".
Talking the proposed subject into account the reason which may shed some light on my point is now thanks to easier prepared food, people have more free time. It goes without saying that most precious treasure of the people is time. Technological devices in the kitchen now food can be eatable by only two minutes. For example, when I was in university, our final week was very tough. So, my last final week I had a two exam in the same day. I went to the super market and I bought easy prepare foods such as pizza, egg. And my time in the kitchen decreased. This extra time was very essential to getting good grade on the final exams. All in all, easy prepared foods save our out time at the same time it improve our live enormously.
Another rationale of why I take positive idea about the first perspective in the introduction paragraph is that easier prepared foods more affordable. It is absolutely certain that we spend our most of the money in order to eat good food. Thanks to easier prepared food we can eat delicious food without paying too much money. For instance, every people like to eat hamburger. When we go to the restaurant one of the affordable food is hamburger. Hamburger is more affordable than other food because it's easier to prepare. We can save money and spend our money to our hobbies. As a result, thanks to affordable easy prepare food, we can spend our money to increase our life quality.
Nevertheless, the two paragraphs of the body should not be overgeneralized. Just an old adage goes "a coin has two sides", those who take the other side are partially reasonable every once in a while. That is there might be a situation in which easy prepare foods such as hamburger. adversely effect the people's life.
To put in a nutshell in a light of previously discussed reasons the viewpoint of those who believe easy prepare foods are unhealthy. Indeed, easy prepare food not only save time but also it can save money and people use this money in order to improve their life. If I could have a chance to eat food, I do not have bit of hesitation to choose easy prepared food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...e. According to scientists, the name of the this era is called technology. Thanks to the...
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Line 1, column 421, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...t idea that easy prepared food improved the how people live, on the other hand, others ...
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Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improves'?
Suggestion: improves
...s save our out time at the same time it improve our live enormously. Another rationa...
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Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ce, every people like to eat hamburger. When we go to the restaurant one of the affo...
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Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Adversely
...h easy prepare foods such as hamburger. adversely effect the peoples life. To put in ...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...such as hamburger. adversely effect the peoples life. To put in a nutshell in a lig...
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Line 9, column 316, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...ave a chance to eat food, I do not have bit of hesitation to choose easy prepared f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 484.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63429752066 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5454704773 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469008264463 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2258520568 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3548387097 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6129032258 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8064516129 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200339676486 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565913449475 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504488854282 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121216894814 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454996202126 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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