Nowadays, many movies or films are based on books. Some people prefer to read the original book before they watch the movie, other prefer to watch the movie before reading the book. Which one do you prefer?
There is no doubt that nowadays, the book plays the key role in people's lives. No one can deny the effects of the book on our private lives. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is which one do we should prefer. Some people may hold this viewpoint that it is better to watch the movie before reading the book. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that read the original book before they watch the movie. From my own perspective, the second belief is true. In what follows, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One of the reasons coming to mind at first is that someone when first read the book, who gets insight about the book, therefore compose film on the basis of the book could review the story of book during the watch movie in mind and then this to cause understanding difference of object between story of book and movie. Although the viewer guesses to last of a film but could understand the rate of collation between movie and book. An empirical study in the Asia shows that due to sharing of the study of the book is low, which when first read the book would causing the share of the study of a book would go to up and secondly people would persuade to watch the movie. This clarifies the fact that people should care about select the book for studying because the book dealing with someone’s soul so persons should select the book with matching their favorite book.
Another equally important reason is that from a psychological standpoint when people read the book, they have more quite than another person. In fact, a person read the books during in life, she can raise her general information and also become to the worldview in life. Moreover, father or mother read a book in the family, the children persuade for reading and they sit down beside their parents and read their book. In this situation, a family gets with reading the book so it is to cause to increase the study level in society.
The last but not the least reason is that although we spend more time for reading a book than to watching movie or film, at first they read the book is better. For instance, when we go to the library for a study to become the society. Also, we joined a group for free discussion about the book and member of the group said their opinion, which could fit back to us. This means that nowadays often of people not enough time for reading a book so just watching the movie last of time but it is not good for family because children are vulnerable.
To wrap it up, it is my deep belief that a book can persuade to persons also would give more worldview to us. It is obvious that even movies or films can be based on the book. Nevertheless, I prefer to read the book at first. All in all, it is anticipated that in future people reading the book rather than spend times for watching movies or films.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 560, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...w, which when first read the book would causing the share of the study of a book would ...
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Line 2, column 651, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'watching'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'persuade' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: watching
...o up and secondly people would persuade to watch the movie. This clarifies the fact that...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: increasing
...with reading the book so it is to cause to increase the study level in society. The last ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2359.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 528.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4678030303 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2581532399 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424242424242 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5543242171 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.565217391 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9565217391 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13043478261 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45348354182 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146518739514 0.076458572812 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999752472382 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284712669625 0.150856017488 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838796906817 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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