Nowadays, people are busy with many things, if you were given a short period of time, what would you choose?
1. Learn to play a new sport you never played
2. Learn to cook food in different way
3. Learn to do some hand-made work like clothes
Nowadays, in modern society, people have a lot of works and usually, they have a little time to relax. Experts state that people should take a short time during the day to do different and useful work because it helps their health. So, people must choose a way based on their time that has a lot of advantages. In my opinion, playing a sport can be more useful than other suggestions. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, the sport such as football is the kind of physical activity, which can be effective for human. It is believed by researchers that playing sport causes our brain to able to release negative energy from the body because doing sport improve the body metabolism, so the body is the best condition, and the brain can do various works very well, but one thing is important and that it is people can receive the best result when they want to experience the new sport because it is more attractive, so it causes people do it with enthusiastic, actually, learned sports cannot affect on the body because people did them before and do them repeatedly is a fool for people. For instance, sometimes, I have a lot of works, which I do all of them in a specific time, but before I want to start my work, I try to do some physical movements because in this way I can better focus on my works.
Secondly, in the short time, I must do a work that has high-efficiency, otherwise, it is bootless. Well, play a new sport is a good choice because when a person decides to learn a sport he/she can it do without being a teacher or a mentor, but other things like cooking foods or making clothes are difficult, so it does need to teach by a specific teacher.
To sum up, taking all the reasons and examples into account, I believe that doing exercise has much more positive impact than other ideas because playing sport create the good condition for body then the brain can better concentrate on our doing activities, moreover, playing sport is the best way to use our time in the shortest time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 584, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...iastic, actually, learned sports cannot affect on the body because people did them before...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51612903226 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55213162352 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489247311828 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.138222807 48.9658058833 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.727272727 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8181818182 20.6045352989 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 5.45110844103 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228434824264 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900647978419 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045660547786 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151401851553 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370007990067 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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