Nowadays, there are many different kinds of news and stories on newspapers for people to read or listen to. It is helpful for people if they take a break from reading or listening to the news. Do you think it is beneficial for people to stop reading or listening to the news for a period of a few days or a week? Why or Why not?
Modern people obtain several situations to read or listen to the news. While some people consider that it is so beneficial for people to know about different kinds of news and stories from news, some deny this suggestion. It is so controvertible for people to determine a specific conclusion. In my view, reading or listening to news and stories in newspapers become advantageous for people. They acquire common sense with bountiful genres, find out a new hobby, and more take care of other people.
To begin with, people establish common sense to read or listen to the news. News and newspapers contain plenty of knowledge and information. When people read a newspaper about business, they will be good at how people manage cash through their life or earn wages. Moreover, it is so significant for them to attain wisdom about politics in their countries. The politicians decide political measures in each nation. Therefore, people profoundly mind the politicians for the next vote because the politicians are responsible for the future of citizens.
Secondly, providing people an opportunity to read newspapers and watch news makes a new hobby. There are many advertisements related to health, cosmetics, and sports, and so on. It is so essential for each company to get attention on the products. One they interest in an ad on news or newspaper, they search for a good on the internet and finally buy it on the internet shopping. As a result, people increase their hobbies to make attention to the news and newspaper.
Finally, news and newspapers produce people to more take care of other people. News show people not only daily news but also criticism and handicap people. After people watch news about these contexts, they pay attention to many problems associated with relationships about others. For instance, people sometimes call a brother who is far from their homeland for his study when they see the news that one man who studies abroad in Japan die by an accident. Consequently, people should read and watch the news for their merits
To sum up, it is beneficial for people to read newspapers or watch the news. I surely believe that they gain common sense, boost the number of hobbies, and more concern others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, as a result, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99197860963 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71044008577 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513368983957 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5362837075 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8636363636 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86363636364 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.558625235257 0.236089414692 237% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174482227719 0.076458572812 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119221628499 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.356837023714 0.150856017488 237% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086394416911 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.