Nowadays universities are the best place to get the best knowledge from, it. Also, it became an important part of our life in spite of taking valuable information from many different fields, we face much new experience we do not face it before. Furthermore, we make the best friend relations from inside and outside our country. that is from my point of view,it is better to invest in the universities infrastructure and the physical plant more than concerning about the faculty satisfaction.
First of all, presence of high quality universities indicate caring of government in the educational system that is mean students are the major priority. for this reason, my view clarify the biggest part of investment should go to universities infrastructure. Such as, building a center for innovative project that help student to maximize their abilities to create and invent new things or to produce new products. For instance, this center presence at Jordan university of science and technology and i have a project it is called EPA that talk about encourage physical activity and reduce risk of having heart diseases. So, this facility helped me a lot to think out the door.
Secondly, the investment should be in all the university aspects. such as, my university contain the largest library in Jordan and the medial east with free internet connection that strength the educational process. Further more, the availability of good infrastructure will lead to more students enrollment from inside and outside and that is mean better economic status in the university and in the country in general. More over, will effect in the university ranking by a positive way.
In conclusion, mp point of view is solid and strong enough to clarify why the investment in the universities infrastructure and physical plant is better caring about about the faculty satisfaction.
It is more important for universities to invest in infrastructure and physical plant than to invest in keeping the faculty satisfied.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays universities are the best place to get the best knowledge from, it. Also, it became an important part of our life in spite of taking valuable information from many different fields, we face much new experience we do not face it before. Furthermore, we make the best friend relations from inside and outside our country. that is from my point of view,it is better to invest in the universities infrastructure and the physical plant more than concerning about the faculty satisfaction.
First of all, presence of high quality universities indicate caring of government in the educational system that is mean students are the major priority. for this reason, my view clarify the biggest part of investment should go to universities infrastructure. Such as, building a center for innovative project that help student to maximize their abilities to create and invent new things or to produce new products. For instance, this center presence at Jordan university of science and technology and i have a project it is called EPA that talk about encourage physical activity and reduce risk of having heart diseases. So, this facility helped me a lot to think out the door.
Secondly, the investment should be in all the university aspects. such as, my university contain the largest library in Jordan and the medial east with free internet connection that strength the educational process. Further more, the availability of good infrastructure will lead to more students enrollment from inside and outside and that is mean better economic status in the university and in the country in general. More over, will effect in the university ranking by a positive way.
In conclusion, mp point of view is solid and strong enough to clarify why the investment in the universities infrastructure and physical plant is better caring about about the faculty satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17491749175 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97151056985 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551155115512 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0294488844 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360871989761 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123976150047 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.206752943482 0.0737576698707 280% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217170018204 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.304926049769 0.0645574589148 472% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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