One should travel only during young age. Do you agree or not?
Nowadays, people are highly involved in their work and other obligations, due to which they remain busy and stressed out. Hence, it is essential for them to take short breaks to relax and unwind from their hectic schedules. In this regard, traveling is a productive option that can enable them to drift apart from their busy lives. Contrary to the belief that it is better to travel in old age after retirement, I opine that it is better to travel at a young age. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the reasons and examples to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first and most obvious reason worth mentioning is the energy and enthusiasm possessed by young people. They have more ability to travel and have adventures compared to older people. This ability drives them to explore more and try out new things. Old people cannot even dare to try adventurous activities because their bodies won’t allow it. My recent experience is a good case in point. I went to Rishikesh with my family; there, I and my cousins ventured on trekking and enjoyed it a lot, but my parents stayed at the hotel as they couldn’t do the trekking.
Second, planning this kind of vacation will help young people working to take a break from their usual workloads. This will eventually help them gather their thoughts and reinforce their power. By traveling, they will acquire skills to handle difficult situations. They will be able to socialize and make new friends as they will encounter lots of people during their journey. For instance, when I plan any trip for my holidays, it requires me to handle and manage money and time. These kinds of skills can be helpful later in our lives.
In conclusion, I would like to reaffirm my point that it is more advantageous to travel when you are young. To recapitulate, during our initial years, we can enjoy more and venture out more. In addition, traveling also helps us take a break from long working hours. Therefore, due to the aforementioned reasons, I feel this way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76724137931 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5860201082 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4707750863 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124610911491 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347694903248 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553375012428 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821601753857 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423172350687 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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